"Oh and you..." Tino said pointing to Zak "Sorry 'bout the knock in the head..and thanks..... for saving my life."

"You numbskull, I was trying to end your life! But thanks for the gratitude."

"You caused quite a fuss so you're going to join Elcrone in his blackouts...goodnite" said Lara slamming her fist into Helen's face "Tie her up, Lara. Along with Elcrone." said tino

"You will do NO such thing!" I said, aiming my gun again. I wondered how many times I would have to threaten people with this gun. I was getting quite tired of it.

"Shall I ask you to leave again or should I just kill you now?" I sneered, aiming the gun up to the temple of Lara's forehead. She grimaced and froze. This wouldn't end well.

"I see you've made your choice!" I yelled, putting pressure on the trigger.

Edited January 3, 200719 yr by VonCroyJr.

"U dont kno how to use tht thing do u" said Lara"safteyss on said Lara knocking the gun outta of his hand and then knocking him out "man will u ever learn" oh and to make sure no more inconveniencing" she said "ill take this pickiing up his revolver" she said running towards the hole from which tino came from "lets go they're tied up" said tino "and i got this said tino holding Helens wallet "cud be useful" he said when they reached the end pulled a lever tht started a series of traps clanging in the passage way from which they came .."sweet" said tino

Edited January 3, 200719 yr by tino croft

((OOC: Okay Tino please stop knocking ppl out it is quite frustrating... BIC))

Helen opened her eyes after pretending to be knocked out cold. She lifted her head to see the a**hole punch another person out. God what is with these people is that all they can do? Helen wondered. Okay... Here goes nothing, Helen leaped to her feet. She smashed Tino in the back taking back her gun. "Thanks, but i have had my rest," Helen said with a wink. She turned her gun towards Lara. "Okay I am going to go again, Okay?" She yelled. "And I frikin swear if even one of you follow I am going to put a bullet through your head!" Helen aimed her gun at Tino. "And you!" Helen pulled the trigger shooting one bullet at Tino's arm. The bullet just skimmed the side of his arm making a small scratch. "That's for using my a freaking punching bag!" Helen threw her gun back onto her back flipping down the hole she came in.

Vennesa ran towards the hole looking down. "She's gone..."

((OOC: also ppl Helen is totally gone please dont bring her in again... I will bring her in when i feel it is the right time... Thanx!))

(alright ppl i promise no more knocking out...for a while and experince deepest apologies forwutever i did and helens gone but u guys r still inside and the traps are working..but dont worry they ae sorta like the ghana ones so u can still get out)

"tht b***h tino said ripping of one of his sleeves and tying it around his arm "i wanna see her bloody profile" said tino pulling out the wallet he had stolen from her "Helen Bromomvits" he read aloud tht name sounds so familiar" Wutever it is best not to concentrate on tht but on this" she said Pointin to the large hole Elcrone had made "Again" said tino disdaintfully "i actually quite enjoy it" said Lara as she swan dived into the water as tino folled"wud u look at tht Elcrone knos all these trapdoors"she said coming across the hole he had previously fallen into "of course we wont be as clumsy as he was "noticing the major disruption of dust and small amount of blood "u kno theres sumthing about tht helen girl" said tino.."it was like she knew my moves,like she had similar training"he said "i noticted tht to" said lara "she was very very agile" she said walking forward

Edited January 3, 200719 yr by tino croft

After the little inident with Helen Vennesa ran through the hole she came in back to Chasity. "Ugh gets better and better," She said sitting next to Chasity. She stashed her gun back into her nap sac and looked at Chasity. "Did you even look at the wallet while i was gone?"

After the little inident with Helen Vennesa ran through the hole she came in back to Chasity. "Ugh gets better and better," She said sitting next to Chasity. She stashed her gun back into her nap sac and looked at Chasity. "Did you even look at the wallet while i was gone?"

"I must be getting immune to those things..." I said as I once again struggled to get off of the frigid stone floor. Crippling pain hit the back of my head as a tried to lift it, more painful than before. "That b*****d nearly broke my neck!" I yelled, fishing in my small backpack for some medicine. The pills were rough and make my throat sore; I should've brought a bottle of water to wash it down. Chastity was standing at one side of the room, accompanied by no one else. "Dammit." I grumbled, staggering to my feet. "I assume everyone's down there?" I asked. I wasn't about to waste more time waiting for a reply, so I jumped down the hole, and was soon met with more freezing water.

"Great." I mumbled, as I surfaced, the cold water prickling my skin like needles. However, everyone was in the room like I had guessed, including 'Sir KNocksoutalot' a.k.a Tino. I checked to see if the safety was actually off this time and crept up behind him.

Vennesa didn't wait for a reply from Chasity as she heard a loud splash come from the other room. "What was that?" Vennesa asked as she got to her feet. "I have a real bad feeling about that Tino guy and that Lara Croft, there is something about them... I dont know... Something isn't right." Vennesa grabbed her nap sac and placed the wallet in it. She threw the bag over her shoulders and dusted herself off. "Hold on," Vennesa said as she stealthily walked to where Zack and the others had gone. She looked down to see a lot of water and the team. Without being seen Vennesa went back to Chasity. "I think we should wait until they go." She looked back. "I don't trust any of them one bit."

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Helen walked in darkness back to where the two girls were. She grappled up. She aimed at the two. "Don't make one sound or you both get it," Helen said with a whisper. "Now when Lara and the others get out of the water at the other side we are going to follow."

Vennesa nodded.

"But we will be going a different way, got it?" Helen asked Chasity.

"Well not today!" Helen said to Zack. She kicked him making him fall to his stomach and then started shooting at Elcrone.

Elcrone drew his sword and blocked all the bullets.

He was knocked out several minutes later, but when he awoke, he saw that most people were still out or helping others. Taking this to his advantage, he swan dived into the lake below and followed Tino and Lara. When he jumped the gap that he had come in previously, he saw them running up a hallway to a chamber beyond. Once Elcrone and Tino and Lara were in this chamber, Elcrone drew a rope from the wall, threw it through the air and both Lara and Tino fell to the ground. He rushed over towards them and tied them up.

He set them against a wall and looked around the room. On a pedestal in the middle of the room held the Scion. Tino and Lara looked at him.

"Seems like the hunt is over," Elcrone sneered, "I must congradulate both of you for keeping those pesking explorers away from me for awhile. I only needed them to help me get this far. And now it seems I have no use for you, or for any of them."

Elcrone turned away from them and walked over to the pedestal. Elcrone picked up the Scion and put it into his pocket.

"Lara, tell Natla that I will be paying her a visit very soon." He smiled.

Eclrone began to walk towards the door they had come through when the whole cave began to collaspe.

(OOC: Okay, the fight scenes are cool, but there is too much violence. Also, try to subsitute the bad words such as a**hole, b****, to others words like darn, idiot jerk and things like that please. Remember, even though you subsitute those words with "*" this is still a G rated forum and people will know what those words are. Thanks )

(k ppl u arent reading posts cuz no1 i took zakks gun and ur in a pit closed wiht traps k neways the story is gonna continue) "RUN FOR IT!!" said Lara runing towards the enclose with tino following closely behind "Damn" said tino as he saw Elcrone jump into the helicopter "i was afraid i wud hve to use this" said lara putting on her headgear "Zipp can u hear me?""Oh man Lara now ur really making me mad u only had tht tino guy to you,,,,m and alister are dying to kno wuts happening to help u" said zipp "zipp we dont hve time." jus hook me up with me good peruvian friend....pedro and get me sum bikes...ducati monsters to be presise"she said with a smirk "one more thing she said while she was climbing down do a search for sumone by the name of "helen Bromomvits im sending u footage of wuts happened recently."im on it"said zipp

Edited January 4, 200719 yr by tino croft

As soon as they reached the bottom of the hills they went into a village and came across a shack on which Lara knocked on its door."wut r we doing here" said tino "i tho we were supposed to get bikes not charity work" said tino "oh we're getting the bikes" said Lara and soon a typical south american man answered the door

"¿Pedro bueno verle otra vez, están las motocicletas listas?" said Lara

"Sí croft de Dama, como su orden de amigo dos Monstruos de Ducati" said Pedro showing them his barn where two black, brand new ducati monsters sat.

"Gracias Pedro que encontraremos otra vez" said Lara starting her engine up

"Por supuesto Dama Croft" said pedro moving out of the way

"u coming or wut" said Lara

"hehe"said tino as he put on a new shirt "i like to ride in style"

"Okay it seems that they have gone," Helen said still gripping her gun. "Okay, you!" Helen said aiming at Vennesa, "You go in first, Stay to your left as there are a lot of traps," She then pointed at Chasity, "You, follow her, and remember... One wrong move could cost you your lives," Helen followed the girls.

Vennesa started through the passage to where she was earlier. She looked to her right to see a passage with hip high water. "I- I can't go in there," She said looking back at Helen. "I am in shorts and a long sleeve white shirt which may I remind you is very thin,"

Helen smiled, "Well you should be happy that you aren't wearing a short sleeve shirt,"

Vennesa turned around looking at the cold water. Maybe I can get away Vennesa thought thinking of a plan. She turned back to Helen. "So you want me to dive into there?"

"Ugh yeah that would be a good idea," Helen said sarcastically.

"Okay," Vennesa ran and dove into the cold water and swam as quickly as possible to get away from Helen. She knew Chasity was a great swimmer so didn't worry about her. I have to get away Vennesa thought as she got up for air. She continued to swim away.

"Oh that will not do," Helen said pushing Chasity into the water. Helen hopped down landing onto her feet. She shot her grapple at Vennesa making it wrap around her. Helen pulled her in and said. "Bad girl,"

Vennesa shivered as she looked at Helen in the eyes. Helen's eyes pierced into Ven's.

"Now, little girl," Helen said looking at Chasity "You will lead now," She looked at Vennesa, "Your friend here is going to stay tied up, but you will keep moving won't you?"

Vennesa nodded.

"Good, now you, follow this path until you come to a fork in the road. Everyone else went left because right leads to a dead end, but we will go right and make a way." Helen smiled evilly.

"Zipp,did u see the footage and get any info about helen"said Lara over the roar of her motorcycle "yes i saw the footage..tht tino guy was knocking ppl out like no ones buisness..and about Helen works for Natla as well but they're sumthing i have to tell u sumthing she previosly worked work for the special forces, the same guys tino's parents worked for but then on april 27th she mysteriously left...when the cops found out it was her..who killed tino's Parents..it was to late..she left no tracs of where she had gone and now shes after number 3

Elcrone landed at his estate manor in Italy, went into his room and began to look over the Scion.

"Damn," he said, "this is only one piece." He looked through his files and found out that Natla knew about the other two. He got onto his computer and soon hacked into the Natla files. He found out where the other two where and began to make preperations.

(OOC: Okay, noone post anything about going to Rome until everyone has caught up. Don't want anyone to be left behind.

"Helen," said a voice coming from Helen's head set.

"What?" said Helen as she kept her gun in her position.

"Somethings has gone wrong--"

"Okay hold on," Helen pushed Vennesa to the ground. "Stay, and you, sit beside her." Helen said to Chasity. "And if you move... Well it varies..." Helen turned around and started talking.

Vennesa shivered as her and Chasity sat in the cold water. She was going to freeze to death if she didn't get out of there. Vennesa soon noticed that Helen had dropped the main piece of the grapple. Did she know? Vennesa wondered as she was wrapped in the cord of the grapple. Vennesa inched until she finally made it to the main piece. It's now or never Vennesa clicked the grapple button and watched as the grapple unwinded off of her. Vennesa snatched the grapple as she yelled, "Go now Chasity!"

Helen whipped around as she heard the girls voice. Suddenly she felt Vennesa's fist in the firls face. Vennesa turned around and tried to make a run for it but was taken down to her stomach as Helen grabbed her boot. Vennesa turned around smashing Helen's face with her foot. Vennesa scurried to her feet and raced to get away.

Helen rushed to her feet saying "gotta go," to the voice in the headset. Helen lifted her gun and started shooting at the girls.

Surprisingly non of the bullets hit the girls as they tore down the water passage. As Helen had to reload Vennesa grab one of her sais and threw it at Helen.

Helen dodged the sais and watched it as it stuck into the wall. "Crap that was close," Helen said as she grabbed the sai. "Hey beeoch I think you misplaced something, I think it is supposed to through your skull." Yelled Helen throwing it back at Vennesa.

Vennesa grabbed the sai that was thrown at her like taught in self defense class. She then raced behind Chasity to the dead end. "Oh god," Vennesa said scared. "Wait a minute..." Vennesa threw off her bag and searched for her gun as quickly as possible. She shot the ice with a couple of bullets. Finally the ice broke and they rushed through. Vennesa quickly turned around and shot higher up to make more ice and rock collapse, making it impossible for Helen to get to them. "Piece of cake," Vennesa said with a smile. As she put her stuff away Vennesa and Chasity continued down the narrow passageway.

Helen rushed down the passageway towards the girls to then find herself at a dead end. "Darn it! They collapsed it Natla!" Helen said into her headset.

"That's okay, well this time. Make your way back and out of that place. I was just told that Elcrone got the scion."

Helen sighed and turned around giving an angry grunt.

Vennesa soon found Zack. "Zack!" She ran over to him. "What's happened?"

Elcrone decided that he was going to pay a visit to Natla. He left his manor early morning and soon arrived in London. He went to Natla's office building and asked the secretary if she was in. She said she was but no one was going to see her without an appointment. Elcrone reached into his black trench coat and showed her a fake police badge.

"Just have to ask her a few questions," he said, hiding the badge again.

"Top floor in the main lab," the secretary said.

Elcrone soon made his way to the top floor and spotted the back of Natla's head, looking over a screen that showed pictures of where he just was in Peru. He went into the lab and said hello.

"Hello Natla," Elcrone said with a strong whisper.

Natla spun around and a look of panic crossed her face, but it soon receeded as she said, "Get him!"

Elcrone drew his whip and whirled it around his head, knocking the guns out of her henchmen's hands.

"I only wish to speak with you Natla. We both want the same thing. We can work together," Elcrone said.

"Go on," said Natla shakilly.

"I have a piece of the Scion, You want it and so do I. If we work together, we can both rule the world." Eclrone said folding his arms.

"And if I refuse?" Natla asked.

"You die," Elcrone said with a faint smile.

Natla seemed to be thinking it over. Finally, she agreed that they could use each others help. They both knew about the Scion very well, and thought that if they combined their skills, they would be unstoppable.

"Great," Elcrone said, "Now, I have already met Lara and Helen, they seem to be fine explorers, it would be great if they would join me on the hunt for the other pieces. I know that you are planning on killing them after they find them, and I would be more than happy to do it myself, especially that Tino guy."

"Done," said Natla and they sat down and talked about when they were going to leave.

Ignore this post.

I had to edit out a scene I typed. I mistook one character for another and accidentaly revealed a plot twist too early.

Edited January 4, 200719 yr by VonCroyJr.

Did you even look at the wallet while I was gone?

''I don't care much for the wallet.''Chasity said, followed by a yawn. ''I'm not used to this type of thing, I'm usually doing some work on the bars or at home being lazy.''

What was that? I have a real bad feeling about that Tino guy and that Lara Croft, there is something about them... I dont know... Something isn't right.

''You're probably right. Do you wanna check it out.''Chasity suggested. She stood up and brushed the dust off herself.

Hold on,

''Oh, what now?!''

I think we should wait until they go. I don't trust any of them one bit.

''Whatever you say Ven.''Chasity lied back down.

Don't make one sound or you both get it,

Oh, crap. What a pleasant surprise, a visit from the crazy b----!

Now when Lara and the others get out of the water at the other side we are going to follow.

''Whatever you say...'' Drag queen!

Oh that will not do,

Chasity gasped as the freezing cold water caused her piercing pain at the thighs and legs.

Now, little girl, you will lead now,

''O-okay...''Chasity said. Warming her arms to make up for the pain in her legs.

Go now Chasity!

Chasity got up and went through the passageway as fast as she could. She turned her head after a while and found that Ven was right behind her after blocking the passgeway. Ven and Chasity found Zack shortly after.

(OOC: Eep, I thought you were still Helen when you found me. This is the problem with multiple characters! I'll delete my other post now. Hopefully not too many people saw it, it was a plot twist w/ my character. )

"Winston"said Lara i brought 2 bikes home,see to it they are put in my garage" said Lara

"Zipp,can i see wut u found out about my parents" said tino

"right here,oh and Lara i got sumthing 4 u 2" said zip "they are more peices to the puzzle, to make a long story short its in Rome"

" im on it"said Lara

"we Leave in the morning" said tino fuming with after finding out who Helen really was..."looks like we'll b working 2gether for a while"

Edited January 5, 200719 yr by tino croft

"It appears we are the first ones here" said Lara upon arriving in the tomb,"i wouldnt say so" said tino looking at the tracks in the ground. "it cant be Larson he's already dead" said Lara "lets hope its not Elcrone" said tino "i dont think so" said Lara as they enterd the tomb "he would do much better than that especiay now tht he doesn't hve his team" they're conversation was interrupted by the sound of lions growling "i like animas but they're are times....." said tino as he shot at oone lion "tino turn ur light on"Lara said shooting at one lion...as soon as they turned they're lights on they found themseves surrounded by a pride of lions "we're in deep **** said tino as he covered lara's back

(OOC: Okay, if anybody wants, we can continue or we can wait for everybody to catch up. If you want to jump ahead that's fine, but until then, I would everybody to catch up please.

Geco-Rome

Elcrone had arrived sometime during the night at St. Francis Folly. He had met up with another freind of Natla's Pierre Du Pont. Together they set off into the ruins and began to look for the second piece of the Scion.

"I dont hve time for this" said tino shooting his grapple upwards and holding lara as he sped toward the ceiling "sry but how about we leave the sum lion for our visitors" said tino pointing to Elcrone and Pierre "why pierre' wut a surprise" said Lara

"Hello Lara," siad Elcrone as he walked forward.

"I am now working for your employer as well. Why not look for it together? Also, I have invited some of my friends that you had the privilage to meet while we were in Peru," Elcrone said, leaning against a pillar.

"Work with you?" Said Lara," I guess we can consider it. For now, let's work together and see how far we get before others arrive. You know of Helen?" she asked. Elcrone shook his head no.

"But dont expect us to hand over the scion piece..its a game of first to reach it" said tino